Sister I applaud you.... I LOVE THIS!! this whisked me off into a world that I need to travel upon more often.... beautiful!

My friend I was flying with every word, every stanza and every shape in which you presented it! Really this is the real expression for emotions. Thank you.
Keep on feeding poetry with your deep thoughts.

Philosophical, educated, mature, poetic and flows well. i admire your outlooks on life, and i admire you as a poet. you're often very matter of fact in your delivery, very blunt yet poetic and it's hard to come by that.

maybe the fourth stanza is a little awkwardly worded for my tastes towards the end but this is still a great piece. I find it hard to criticise your work, Karla :)

Firstly I have to say I love the quote that you put at the beginning of your poem, I really do love it. I love that you have derived your poem from this quote.

I loved reading this piece, the words, images, everything in this is amazing.

I've said it before your English is so wonderful, if you start writing in another language I will need to learn that language just to read your poems lol

Awesome

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