Comments : Striver

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Inspiration sings in this piece! I adore this poem!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Yes you can Yaki! I loved the brevity in this and the few lines that explain so much, how every hope and feeling of neglect seems to flood into your life, but how with your wonderful heart and soul, you'll be able to overcome.

    Powerful piece, great job :]

  • 12 years ago

    by Mohan

    Very nice poem i like the way u r telling