Versus (Diamante)

by Meme   Jun 24, 2012


His Heart
young, reanimated
beating, loving, experiencing
independent, dauntless, entangled, guarded
bleeding, desiccating, aging
mature, conservative
My Pen

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© Copyright 2012 by: gIrL
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A Diamante is a seven-lined contrast poem set up in a diamond shape.

Written in the following form-

Line 1: Noun or subject
Line 2: Two Adjectives describing the first noun/subject
Line 3: Three -ing words describing the first noun/subject
Line 4: Four words: two about the first noun/subject, two about the antonym/synonym
Line 5: Three -ing words about the antonym/synonym
Line 6: Two adjectives describing the antonym/synonym
Line 7: Antonym/synonym for the subject

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  • 12 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Nice execution of the form and nice flow throughout.

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    I love how it looks like a diamond.

    You are the queen of formed poetry, most certainly hun. I am in awe of your writings.

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Oh my......sigh, meme you know i love your writing...but this was something else, a great style which i have gotta try, iit made me meeeeeelt reading it - perfect choice of words and flow , simply fantastic x