by East Poetry Jun 25, 2012
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
I'm living a life with a fantasy wife! |
by TJ Standen
This is a wonderful poem Randy. It flows really well and the message is clear. I really enjoyed reading it |
This is very sweet, i'm sure your wife adores it and you. i just love how nicely it flows! |
Nicely Penned Randy!!! |
by Omar
Wow, this is an a amazing poem. I like the flow. Nice job randy. |
by Darren
I have upgraded my comment from 'this is good' to 'this is awesome Randy', It flows at a great pace and the message is really strong, The last stanza has gone from the weakest to the strongest in your re write. Thanks for the read. |