She's all that I wanted and more! |
by Darren
This was good Randy, I hope you have already met her. |
by East Poetry
Lol... I just spelled it wrong... I fixed it... thank you. |
by Darren
Now that makes much more sense, I like the last stanza now, It actually strengthens and ties in the whole perfect relationship. |
Cleverly written poem Randy, as all your poems are! Really enjoyed reading this write, so I read it several times over! |
by Darren
I have upgraded my comment from 'this is good' to 'this is awesome Randy', It flows at a great pace and the message is really strong, The last stanza has gone from the weakest to the strongest in your re write. Thanks for the read. |
by Omar
Wow, this is an a amazing poem. I like the flow. Nice job randy. |
Nicely Penned Randy!!! |
This is very sweet, i'm sure your wife adores it and you. i just love how nicely it flows! |
by TJ Standen
This is a wonderful poem Randy. It flows really well and the message is clear. I really enjoyed reading it |