Comments : Call Me Your Rose

  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsey

    I was a judge and here was my comment:

    Wow....I'm so...practically speechless....this poem was so beautifully written, which is very cliche' to say, but literally the second I got done reading that's the only word that came to my mind....your words were written so romantically which can be hard to do when you're begging for this person back...

    Loved the title...loved what you were asking this person when describing the rose. Amazing imagery when you incoporated winter....

    My favorite line "because darling I swear I'll cut my heart out, if this glass breaks into shards"...ughhh...so poweful!...overly in love with this poem. Rate:10...excellent work

    Please oh please win the weekly contest...my god this was amazing!

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    Oh my!

    Epic beautiful heartfelt amazing personal touching

    And everything else!!! Loved this one, it was like a story and showed you open up in this piece. Let yourself be vulnerable

    I loved it. Awesome write