Comments : Love advise

  • 12 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    This is beautiful Ole
    love only comes in open form
    never hide your worries
    My fav lines

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    I love the rhyming in this poem, it is quite subtle and makes the poem enjoyable to read. I love the advice you are giving in this poem, not taking things for granted and stopping our busy schedule and taking the time to be grateful about life and love.

    Awesome.

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Surprisingly I also loved the rhyming in this poem too! Ole all of your poetry I find so cute and it leaves me smiling and feeling bubbly :)

    Beautiful write as always.