It`s amazing how can you write so well using such difficult expressions and still make it all sound so understandable. Good job, keep it up ^^

She mirroring him,
she hearing it coming softly,
feetless steps, flesh upon flesh,
senses, the otherness transcending
and swimming in her tenderly.

^ God, Karla, I looove this part a lot. Its fast pace is just so enticing.

Amazing

Beautiful word choice, it all flowed so well, so delicately and admirably. I loved this poem, the last line was spectacular. I also enjoyed the layout of the poem, it made it seem light, to match the sweet essence. 5/5

mandy :)

I love what you wrote here Karla, the images were awesome but I am not sure I am familiar with this topic.

The layout of the poem was beautiful and the words you've used as well, inspirational.

Awesome write!

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