Such Pride

by A Poets Handwriting aka ALISHA   Jun 27, 2012


Can sense the soaring in your heart
The lifting of your spirits
The pure joy you feel at your success

Can see the smile widen on your face
Hear your voice rise with excitement
Feel the tremor of your suppression...

It must feel quite amazing
To have contributed something
to the world in which we live

To have such pride
In order to look back and say:

'I did that'

By A.Sherden
22 June - 27 June 2012

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  • 12 years ago

    by TSI25

    This is definitely an excellent read for those who have accomplished whatever significant thing in their lives. its like a public commemoration for those that have earned it, and i think anyone can get behind that. overall i thoroughly enjoyed it though it could maybe tolerate a once over again for fine tuning. nothing sticks out in particular, but i feel as though its potential hasnt been fully reached if that makes sense. overall though, 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Purple Rose

    Typos: I believe in the second line 'Thw' is supposed to be 'The.'

    I would add 'Can you' or something like that at the beginning of the poem - it would just make it people understand it better. I would also at 'you' in between 'Can' and 'see.' However, that is just my opinion.

    I really like this poem, Alisha. To tell you the truth, I think people who have succeed in doing this deserve this. They have right to feel happy at what they accomplish, I just wish that I could do something like that :]

    Excellent
    5/5

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