Comments : Green Fields

  • 12 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    Wow. I was fascinated with this wonderful poem...I love the imagery and I feel delighted...I can picture out the freshness of nature and the green grasses contrived you here...

    `I let the wind guide my body
    As I dance through the rhythm
    Of that sound
    Me and nature become one.
    Finally I found the place I belong.

    I really love the way you end your poem here...I am nature lover you know..so I really appreciate your poem, dear...I didn't expect that you can write like this...I'n very impressed. Keep writing more,Alexandra. I know you have a great potential and skills as a good writer. Godbless you always:))
    Btw, you got 5/5

    ~mery:))

  • 12 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Lovely, I could really picture myself doing that, running to a field of soft fresh grass and just throing myself down on it.

    such a beautiful poem, well done.