Is it

by Omar   Jun 28, 2012


There's something about you,
but i don't know what it is.

Is it your blue ocean like eyes,
or is it the way you laugh.

Is it your beautiful smile,
or is it the way you flip your hair.

I don't really know what it is,
but all i know is i have to make you mine.

(this is my first poem i have ever written. So if you dont like it, just tell me and i will try to improve. Thanks for reading.)

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  • 12 years ago

    by X Harlea X

    This is pretty good, I like it.

  • 12 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    This is very sweet and good for your first write.

    keep writing and you will always improve! :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Owner of an Untamed Heart

    I loved it. There's a simplicity that I love about it; almost an innocent and childish love that can grow to become stronger. 5/5 definitely

  • 12 years ago

    by Amanda

    I really like it! the imagery is great and very good for a first poem.

  • 12 years ago

    by Edward D Zurovec

    Nice write Omar, Keep reading and writing.
    Peace and Blessings

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