Well, I liked this poem Omar!
You speak from your Heart.
I hope you get this lady!
(she'll be the lucky one!)

Well, I liked this poem Omar!
You speak from your Heart.
I hope you get this lady!
(she'll be the lucky one!)

I love this poem because its quite cute

Nice poem.

Great Omar! Keep on penning.
Just I've an advice:
I done really know what it is,
should be
I don't really know what it is,
I guess I;m right, yes?
This is aside, But I really enjoyed the flow
Thank you
...Khalid...

Good job Omar! -just one suggestion, on the line
-is it your blue ocean like eyes,
how about something like
-is it you ocean blue eyes,
just for some more flow. :)

This is great your off to a good start :)

As i read your poems, i like how i can picture it inside my head, great imagery :D

Thank you for all of your comments

Nice write Omar, Keep reading and writing.
Peace and Blessings

I really like it! the imagery is great and very good for a first poem.

I loved it. There's a simplicity that I love about it; almost an innocent and childish love that can grow to become stronger. 5/5 definitely

This is very sweet and good for your first write.

keep writing and you will always improve! :)

This is pretty good, I like it.