Crucial, heart breaking, tragic. Nice flow of emotion. |
by Tanya
This a well written poem even though it has a few spelling mistakes but that doesn't matter. The one thing I loved while reading was the emotions and your choice of words that you used to describe that emotion. |
by Krysten
I loved the emotion in this one (: well done keep it up |
by Marvellous
Every deed awaits a reward. Till scarcity, value is lost. End of a matter spells victory. Him who laughs at last, laughs the best. |
by Reyna
I hope that one day you'll find a girl that will love you for you. you have a kind and happy personality. you deserve more than that. keep up the great poetry. |
by Areeba
Awesome it was... Really what goes around, comes around ... Keep it up :) |
by losing myself
I think this is my favorite, it tells a story an that's what i do in all mine and it's an experience, great job^^ |
by neon sunset
Beautiful poem. |
This is great and so true... karma will get them everytime :) |
by X Harlea X
Good word flow ((5)) |
Beautiful *5* |