Sweet Colette (Doditsu).

by Steven Beesley   Jun 29, 2012


Colette the love of my life.
Your sweet smile lingers in my
eyes each morning, before you
gently kiss my lips.

Doditsu:

The Doditsu is a fixed folk song form of Japanese origin and often portrays love or humor as subject matter.

It comprises 26 syllables made up of four lines of 7-7-7-5 syllables respectively. It usually does not rhyme.

29th June, 2012 (c)

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  • 11 years ago

    by yogi73

    Very sweet and romantic. thanks!

  • 12 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Such a sweet poem. Very simple but really sums up your feelings for this girl. Great job. -Nik

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    I really admire this form, and when love and romance are laced within, its very captivating... Beautiful piece!