Loose Stitches

by Jump from Life   Jun 29, 2012


Fighting for years on end.
No longer will I bend
to your whims and wishes
because loose are becoming my stitches
that hold me together.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Reyna

    You gotta hold on. lov u <3 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Purple Rose

    This is a very short poem, but very effective (at least to me). It holds a beautiful message.

    The only suggestion that I have is to make the 'O' in 'NO' lower case so it matches the rest of the poem, but if you have it like that for a reason, then don't listen to a word that I am saying :)

    Short, simple, and powerful

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