This is a very short poem, but very effective (at least to me). It holds a beautiful message.

The only suggestion that I have is to make the 'O' in 'NO' lower case so it matches the rest of the poem, but if you have it like that for a reason, then don't listen to a word that I am saying :)

Short, simple, and powerful

You gotta hold on. lov u <3 5/5