What a so enticing poem! wonderful! I like it 5/5

I didn't understand, sorry for the inconvenience, but Karla, is the whole piece the song of Pink Floyd?

Nice work. I love it.

Ah okay, I just thought that the 1st half of the poem is for Pink Floyd....

then now.... God, you really should write songs !!!!

Though the structure of this poem was weird to my eyes and ears, but I like it. You always have something new to offer to us. You always surprise me, and I always ... have a heart attack!

Dayum, this is awesomely brilliantly awesome and addicting!

I love this poem! The structure is a bit odd, but great, and it was very interesting to read. Thank you for writing. :)

I love how you were inspired by music!!!

A simple but beautiful poem. I love the image of swimming in fish bowls!!! Awesome Karla.

x

Karla....i love pink floyd.....i love this write......E-P-I-C!!!!!

Just fantastic :-))

Karla....i love pink floyd.....i love this write......E-P-I-C!!!!!

Just fantastic :-))