Gamblers

by Meme   Jun 29, 2012


A girls heart is not a thing
you bet on with your friend,
nor is it a new brand
or a hot summer trend.
Its not a free concert
that you get to attend,
nor a renting place for
you to get to recommend.

So don't walk away and
say nothing just yet,
because I know you think
you won my heart on a bet.
It was another heart
you were aiming to get,
now you think you are left
with this massive regret.

Let me tell you what a
lot of people don't know,
love is not complicated
still its not an easy borrow.
Sometimes you can fall
for it with a simple hello,
but mostly you should
wait and let it slowly grow.

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© Copyright 2012 by: gIrL
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  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    The first part of the poem was so epic, especially the gambling and concert images.. the second part was great, not like the first, but I like your points of view. Ever though of becoming a khattabi?? loool kidding <3

    great piece

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    I love this poem hun and totally agree with what you are saying!!! I don't like it when people play with hearts as if they mean nothing.

    I was saddened by the words though. I mean I wonder if this is from personal experience or not because if it is I am sorry. No one should be treated that way.

    Loved the rhyming too!!!

    You are a legend at it!!!

    Awesome write babe

  • 12 years ago

    by Sunshine

    I LOVE THIS PIECE< ALTHOUGH NOT YOUR BEST BUT THE MESSAGE BEHIND IT IS AWEESSOME< AWESOME< i wish i can tag some ppl over here

    freakingyaaasjfhsdjfhjsdhfc :] love it girl

  • 12 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Thats because you are the queen of rhymes in my eyes ;-) and i think its most fitting :-p
    Although i am biase lol x

    • 12 years ago

      by Meme

      Awwwww, thanks a lot Benny Ben. You know you are Mr Rhyme, right? lol :-P

  • 12 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    I was wondering why you call yourself Mrs Ryhme and now i now why. Not only do you rhyme but you are good at them too. It was evident in this piece that you are good with words, i also enjoyed the message or content of this piece.

    • 12 years ago

      by Meme

      Thanks a lot. Well I didnt call myself Mrs Rhyme, but Ben called me that and it kinda stuck with me, hehe :-P

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