OMG I LOVE YOUR RHYMES!!!!

NOMINATED!!!!!

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Meme, I love the ending. You really are Miss Rhymes! Mwa.

The title? Reminds me of Nizar Qabbani ;)

I totally agree with this poem a girls heart is not something you bet on I like message this piece sent out very good write

Tony :)

I was wondering why you call yourself Mrs Ryhme and now i now why. Not only do you rhyme but you are good at them too. It was evident in this piece that you are good with words, i also enjoyed the message or content of this piece.

Thats because you are the queen of rhymes in my eyes ;-) and i think its most fitting :-p
Although i am biase lol x

I LOVE THIS PIECE< ALTHOUGH NOT YOUR BEST BUT THE MESSAGE BEHIND IT IS AWEESSOME< AWESOME< i wish i can tag some ppl over here

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I love this poem hun and totally agree with what you are saying!!! I don't like it when people play with hearts as if they mean nothing.

I was saddened by the words though. I mean I wonder if this is from personal experience or not because if it is I am sorry. No one should be treated that way.

Loved the rhyming too!!!

You are a legend at it!!!

Awesome write babe

The first part of the poem was so epic, especially the gambling and concert images.. the second part was great, not like the first, but I like your points of view. Ever though of becoming a khattabi?? loool kidding <3

great piece