Great display of emotion. |
by Just A Stupid Girl
I like this bc almost everybody can relate to this. |
by Rebirth
Omar!!! Damn am speechless |
by amanda
I can feel the pain in this poem, and i can relate to being blinded by love or happiness. Great job, Omar. |
by Janis
It is indeed well known sadness to many of us and I like how simple, but well you explained it good job! Also if you don`t mind I would like you to think about these little things - "but they just rushing to get rid of your heart." you need to use either are before rushing like "but they are just rushing...." or use just rush, like "but they just rush..." and "but found out that they change the lock." since this is past tense you should use "....that they have changed the lock" and "but you were blinded by you own love." you should use your instead of you ".....by your own love." |
by Tanya
I love this poem because it is full of emotion and I can totally relate to this. 10/10 |
by Reyna
This poem gives off a lot of emotion. keep it up. and yeah i totally know that feeling. it hurts to be rejected. 5/5 ;) |
by Areeba
Loved it... It was awesome., so much of emotions are put into it ... Great job!! :) |
by losing myself
Well everyonee basically said it, but i love it too(: i never thought about love this way you described |
by Jess
Waw,It's deep feelings |
by Kayla Heinze
I lobe this!!! I can relate to all of it sadly haha getting rejected sucks!! |
by Kayla Heinze
I love lol |
by SheenaMarie
Great write full of emotion 5/5 |
Good write. |
by Kate
The last one is the one I am most familiar with. Love, no matter what the outcome, is worth the fight. It helps you see and find what you are looking for :) still, this poem tugs the heart strings of us all. |
by Jhierren Paz
This one, I like this much. ;D lol |