by tainted melody Jun 30, 2012
category :
Love, romance /
love is
Wating for the words to come, |
by Moonlit Candles
This was great. :) Really enjoyed your emotion expressed throught with all the different metaphors. Nice write. :) |
by Amanda Brown
You write beautifully and your interpretation of love is wonderful to read xx |
by White Orchid
Wow! I thought this poem was really really good. The whole idea you used of a relationship being built on sand really conveys how u wanted it to. I thought that was a great thing to use b/c it makes the emotion in it deeper and I absolutely loved this. The flow was perfect, rhyming was well, and also the whole overall poem was great! :) that's my honest opinion. :p. Also, u broke the writing funk all of us have been in. Lol |