by Saerelune
You truly know how to write sensual poetry, making use of glamorous words which could easily turn off a reader, though with your poetry, it works. I guess the only line where it became a little bit too much for me, was this one: "mimicries of a supernova escaping merlot lips." Maybe because the rhythm of the previous line made it seem like the stanza would end there, and with the mouthful of words in the line I pointed out, it seemed out of place. |
Thank you for the kind words! And I definitely agree about that one line, I am removing it. Reading over the piece again with fresh eyes, it does seem long winded and out of place. Cheers! :) |
by Omar
Wow, just a amazing poem. Love your work. :) |
by Karla
Stellar piece. Always a pleasure to read your poems. |
by Unrequited
Your talent seems to have no end.The images you create are stunning... |