by Willie Jun 30, 2012
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Cool clear fountain waters |
by Maple Tree
I really enjoyed this poem. You have captivated the reader with your wonderful visual display of words... You took me to the park, where I saw beauty and I could actually hear the sounds from the ball game. I adore poems that whisk me away.... You also wrapped your feelings and disappointment within this poem which gave it a creative flare.... really enjoyed this piece, and welcome to PnQ :-) |