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Thanks Noura for directing me to this! :)

This is WOWZERS! I love it...it is fantastic, so sad and so heartbreaking but I just love it, it is a masterpiece of total brilliance!!!!!!

MaryAnne, You really are a talented poetess, just awesome :)

The first time I read this, I ignored it, for I forgot who is Ursula.

And when Noura directed me again in here :P I remembered her from Ariel...

such a beautiful piece, M'Anne!:)

MarryAnne,

I feel such sadness here and I can't help but wonder if you really mean this or not because it totally broke my heart. The descriptions, the way you titled it with Ursula, the way I read it with goosebumps and chills, the way you said 'approach me like a sweet urchin' and how you made me feel you...I can't figure out where or how to comment. I just found this quite heartbreaking and perfect. I really want to see it on the front page, I hope it will!

'And I signed
into your protection,
only to be made mute
into your Desiree-'

What a smart brain you have. Only that I disliked the repeated usage of 'into', I honestly was slightly disappointed. I hate it when such mistakes or let's says typos distract me from wonderful meanings like this one. But it's totally forgivable since what you have here is beyond beautiful. I love the insertion of 'Desiree'. How clever is that. And the way you sought for protection and the way I felt insecure about this whole thing...I'm back to being speechless. I'm sorry!

What can I say? Just perfect.