Comments : Skipping a Meal

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    So it was yours :)
    I gladly voted for this;; amaaaziingg!

  • 12 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    WOW!!! This is soooo sensual but in a sort of humorous way, I found myself smiling through this (Thank You) and felt the imagery was vivid without being explicit...

    Really great write....

    :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Jenni

    I so loved this write :P
    It took me a while to guess what utensil you picked because this is just too real, but that's rather good I guess lol
    You rock Chels! :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    I smiled all the way through this :-) dam chels you rock \m/ !

    It was such a good write and deserved to win, just the right balance of language and imagery too.

    And i soooo knew this was yours lol

    Epic as always x

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    :O

    Sexy

    It was all that boobie talk we had wasn't it lol

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Now I just have to say this... You took this challenge and ran with it... I loved your sensual and playful tone that you took within each stanza... fun in the kitchen... what a fun, sensual, and passionate, playful write Chelsey!

  • 12 years ago

    by Angie

    DAMN girl.... that was HOT!! If skipping a meal was always like this, I'd be skipping a meal everyday... love it!!

    You have come such a long way with your writing in the last 7 years that I have known you, I am so very proud of you Chelz, keep up the amazing work...

  • 12 years ago

    by The Prince

    Haha, this is great. Good pace, light hearted and sensual without being dramatic. Fun :)

  • 12 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Wow, this was a very passionate poem... and it's funny because I didn't expect it at all! Oddly enough I was expecting a poem about diet or skipping meals to lose weight or 'fit in' or something similar to that from the title! I love being surprised while reading a poem, and this poem did that for me.

    I love how you started it - and I must say the descriptions were lovely. I like how you said you were wearing an apron and that this person was 'jealous' of it... that made me laugh and smile... it's a thought that sometimes crosses our minds but we rarely would say out loud!

    Great job with this poem hon :)