This poem was a real eye opener for me because i am going through writers block.

i really like the words you used in this, but one thing you could work on with this is the rhythm, it seems off in some places. unless this is a poem that doesnt really have rythm. most people like a good poem when it does though so just think about it.

overall, i really liked it. im struggling with writers block at the moment. 5 months and nothing has been written.
5/5
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