I like the flow of this. It matches the pain almost painting a picture. 5/5

I used to hate down-raters but now, not at all. I kind of think this should be a small quote or something. Doesn't have that sense of poetry! However, 5.

You are very talented and imaginitive.my only critique is,to an extent,the content.im troubled by the number of contemplated suicides i find in many poets ive read on this site.also i find it beneath the poets craft to meditate on suicide as a release,vengeance or anything other than terribly sad and to be rejected.

You can see the emotions written along with this. Very well written.

This is really amazing!(:

This is amazing!! 5/5 it's exactly how I feel!:) Another great poem:)