I'm sorry (by Omar and Reyna)

by Omar   Jul 2, 2012


I love you so much,
can't you see,
that you belong with me.

Even though I do things that hurt,
I try and try
to make everything right,
but I always end up making you cry.

I'm trying my hardest to prove to you
that I am here and I love you,
but i just want to see you smile.

So if i make you unhappy then I will resist
the sight of you gives me bliss.
the movement when our eyes meet,
but you look away with blue eyes so sweet.

I didn't relize i hurt you until now,
I wish I could change the past somehow,
I know i'm not perfect, not even close,
but i hope you expect the apology i owe.

(Thank for reading. And if your going to comment here then you should also common on reyna. She helped out to. Oh if any one of yall want to write a poem with me, you're welcome to do so.)

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  • 12 years ago

    by A Poets Handwriting aka ALISHA

    A beautiful write.
    It flowed and rhymed really well.

    Corrections:

    In the last stanza:
    'relize' should be 'realize'

    Also, 'i' should be 'I'

    Fantastic job. 5/5

    **I will post this in the other author's profile too.

    ^^ I cannot find the 'Reyna' you speak of - perhaps a direct link? OR add that you have collaborated with this person in the box provided when you sumbit/edit poems?

  • 12 years ago

    by X Harlea X

    Good job Omar. 4/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Owner of an Untamed Heart

    This was so beautiful. 5/5 great job.

  • 12 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    This shows that you are willing to do anything for her, even make yourself unhappy just to make her happy... great job.

    Keep writing! :)

  • 12 years ago

    by lilia

    Your poems are very heart felt and beautiful keep writing.

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