Great poem. Bro trust me i know that pain. Nice job.

Wow, I will have to agree, I really liked this one :)

I tried to keep all my promises,
You don't know how much it hurts to try and breathe,
Yet at the end of it all my heart broke again,
Clinching the knife in my hand that I need to release,
Confused on what's right but, I'm afraid of the wrong,
How do I convince myself to stay strong,
When you're headed a seperate way...

I love that stanza, it catches my attention and draws me into the rest of the poem. Your word flow for it was amazing, and overall I really enjoyed reading this. ((5))

"Clinching the knife in my hand that I need to release,
Confused on what's right but, I'm afraid of the wrong."

The best line. In my opinion.

Well done.