Comments : Heels and Icecream

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    Heels and Icecream... lol - I thought first of very dirty things when I read the title. Anyway...

    I really like the summer setting there. It's kind of colorful, yet I found it somehow foggy, maybe because of your tone.

    I want a poem, that
    would change the end
    of the story,
    like moving your emotions
    perhaps you wont
    leave me short-
    with high heels.

    ^ My favorite stanza. IT's awesome!

    • 12 years ago

      by Sunshine

      Vahahaha dirty things lmao ...you are hilarious

  • 12 years ago

    by Sunshine

    ACtuallly I was on instant msging with Nano the poetess :P and we were saying senseless stuff, we didnt know what we were saying but we were talking bout things we need to shop, and i said i want black heels and ice creams, then she said, i also want heels and icee creaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaam gibberish gibberish bla bla..so i was like

    HEELS AND ICE CREAM, let's write a collab... :P she liked the idea, alas, started it alone and ended it alone :P

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    Let's collaborate about Guns and Roses :P

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    3m te7ki jad? Translation: true?

    yupiiiiiiiiiiiiii
    "don't feel the presure" :P

    • 12 years ago

      by Sunshine

      Haaha check ur inbox :P

  • 12 years ago

    by nouriguess

    WHAT. YOU CHEATER. YOU STARTED THIS WITHOUT ME.

    Ha, I don't like it, aslan. :( </3

    ma 7elweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.

    We were going to write a funny poem! Nana, you went off msn not me! <////////3

    Dobbbeeeee.

  • 12 years ago

    by nouriguess

    On a second thought, I like it, lol. I like how you mixed childhood with adulthood here as you told me on msn. But oh my heart is really broken. :(

  • 12 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW!!!!!!

    That's it :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    :O The title drew me in because it is so different and unique.

    I have to say though - I hate heels : | but I lovvvvvvvvve me some ice cream lol (I have flat feet so I don't like wearing heels even though I probably should since I am so short) but heels are not my friend.

    :O @ make love to your soul. HOW AWESOME IS THAT!!!

    Oh to feel the connection there, simply AWESOME.

    I love the images on this one. You may be talking about poetry but I believe that can also be a metaphor for LOVE itself. I mean when you talk about a poem not ending, I think you're talking about true love not ending. I find this piece awesome with so many metaphors and images that really captivate me, from beginning to the end.

    AWESOME

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