Comments : Insomnia

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    I have to say that this poem is something tha I can relate to because I've had this so many times, the sleepless nights, the agony and when you do finally get to rest your eyes for a moment it's time to get up and go to work.

    I think what you have written here is brilliant and describes in perfect what it's like.

    Many others will be able to relate as well.

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Insomnia is a terrible thing. Your body is
    tired and your mind won't shut down.

  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Your first two stanzas were awesome here :) I hate insomnia I know what that feels like as Im sure so many others do too.

    I loved the imagery here, wrestling with the sheets, the want and crave of falling asleep to dreamland! Ugh.

    Great piece!