'out' = 'our'?

Third Stanza: "let our bodies be used and out.."

^^ "Out" seems to be a typo!

Nicely written piece!

Love the lines you wrote~

Love is a secret
no one ever spoke of,
but somehow it's inside
our hearts.

Filled with emotion. 5/5!

Love is a secret
no one ever spoke of,
but somehow it's inside
our hearts.

A very good opening to your poem! It is indeed a secret that none speak of. It is also the fuel which makes people act and do things that are so strange too!

Liked the read and liked the message behind this write :)

LOVED this poem, so nicely written. 5/5