I don't think it might have been intentional, but I found humor in this piece. Lol

So the gals, look for the guys who are fit.
And want to marry them.
That's what I understood but the way you worded it was kind humorous. At least to me. Good write.

This to me made little sense. it was good however. it wasnt rap if you ask me. but i like it nonetheless.

Like Luce said, I find humor in this poem. I don't know if you intended though, but I hope that you did. If you did intend it to be funny, I suggest you move it to the humor section of PnQ. However, this is your poem so you do what you want to with it :)

Typos: Sixth stanza, fourth line, 'of' needs to be 'off' because they are running off after the deed...'of' doesn't make sense there.

Well, to tell you the truth Thomas, I was a little offended by this poem.

'Oh my son
Beware my gender
Cause they will hunt you down
And eat your heart tender

They just look to breed
Without emotional connection
And will run of
After the deed'

^ What is that? That is not true! Not all of us are like that -_- I imagine that you somehow felt this way because of another girl? Well understandable, but don't go blaming the whole sex in general. If this was humorous, then I might be able to tolerate it, but right now I am assuming that this is how you actually feel because it is under the 'life' section.

Well, I will give you a 5 for your creativity, but that is it. I might as well go write a poem about men ^_^

Excellent
5/5

When first reading this I was confused... but I read it again and I get it now. I agree with the others, it is kind of humorous, whether it's intended to be or not. The wording made it appear that way.

Overall a good poem!