Still falling...

by BlueEyedAnomaly   Jul 5, 2012


Can you hear me?
I'm silently calling,
Do you see me?
I'm slowly falling.

Will you get me the help,
That I refuse to recieve?
Would you stay,
If I needed you to leave?

No, you don't hear me,
So i'll stop calling.
But even if you don't see me,
I'm still falling.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Formidable Muse

    Lovely yet sad. I feel like that would be a perfect poem to turn into a song, like with the way the words flow. Just a thought (:

  • 12 years ago

    by Mohan

    Well done keep it up

  • 12 years ago

    by Janis

    Sad, short but powerful piece. Like how well you did show your emotions there, good job keep it up.

    P.S.Take care there and cheer up a bit will be okay ^^

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