Comments : Intro (Tanka)

  • 12 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    THE QUEEN OF FORM i bow to thee!

    Beautiful tanka! Love it :-) x

    • 12 years ago

      by Meme

      It was written for you .. you know! lol :-P

  • 12 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Awwww then i will make sure not to throw anything away lol :-p

    • 12 years ago

      by Meme

      Lol, looks like a good deal to me :p

  • 12 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Awww I love this! I really like the simplicity of this poem, but it still has depth. It got me thinking of first impressions, and how people shouldn't judge someone when they first meet them.

    Loved it! Great job :D

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    Ben is totally right lol You are awesome at formed poetry and we can all learn something from that! I still need to write one as I haven't written one in a while!

    Awesome poem hun!!!

    x