Comments : Morning sunshine

  • 12 years ago

    by Odin Ebbesen

    Hi amazing an ordinary morning transformed to beauty

  • 12 years ago

    by Thomas

    Very well written. I like the way you describe a very average morning :)

    With the transformation to a teacher do you mean the profession or the person?

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    This is very cute. Sometimes the simplest things like waking up in the morning next to the one you love can make all the difference in your outlook on life.

    Great write! :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    Beautiful images here!

    I love the first stanza - it reminded me of this morning except when I got up it was still dark but the emotions of wanting to stay in bed and curling up with my loved one was there.

    Awesome!

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by kolembo

    Good stuff. We all need the beat of a heart in the morning.

    http://kolembo.wordpress.com/2011/02/17/short-poetry-words-move-lies-in-love-sex-gay-honesty-relationhip-lasting/