Comments : Not Just Anyone

  • 12 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Awww what a sweet poem!

    I must say I loooove this part: "even when I am in the middle of chaos my mind still finds its way to you." >> I found it to be very relatable as well!

    And another beautiful part: "In between the lines you write I have found a home for me"
    >> I think we can all relate to this in some way, because some of us to get moved by the poetry or even books/letters etc we read from others. That's how I interpreted it anyway :)

    To be honest I was kind of hoping for more at the end... I felt like it needed a little more 'something' .. since all of your poems have such special endings!!

    But I still love this poem and think you did a great job hon! <333

  • 12 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    I love it, love all of it, love everything you write, love you x

    • 12 years ago

      by Meme

      Thanks .. Hahaha, lol :-p

  • 12 years ago

    by nouriguess

    'In between the lines you write
    I have found a home for me'

    That made the poem for me, Meme!

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Sighs..........

    This was elegant....simply elegant!

    Made my heart melt and my poetic eyes dance!
    Beautiful!!

    • 12 years ago

      by Meme

      Wow!! Thanks hon :-)

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    Meme.... you are an artist. I know that you have a lot to offer... and the most amazing pieces are yet to come from you, my friend

    That is just pure beauty and elegance :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    :O MEME,

    So beautiful and poetic.

    I don't know what to say, this poem really speaks from the heart and I was in awe reading it.

    Brilliant,

    Stunning

    I love the image of waves crashing in eyes. Oh that makes them sound so lively!!!

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    Oh, this is so beautiful. It made my heart sigh.

    My favorite lines are:
    "In between the lines you write
    I have found a home for me"

    "And with
    your thoughts my pen moved to
    build you a world of poetry"

    and then the last stanza was pure perfection! :)