Comments : To whom It May Concern

  • 12 years ago

    by Jump from Life

    Beautiful write. Gorgeously penned.
    At a few points in the poem I think you should have added more than just comma's. I'm saying this because it helps the reader feel the emotion when the proper punctuation is used.
    I love it either way. 5/5 <3
    P.S. Never give up darling, I'm always here to listen if you ever need to talk.