Just ok? Are You Kidding? I`m Freaking Bloody Estatic

by craig   Jun 28, 2004


My eyes cry out with love
and all that goes with loving.
my little snowflake in my hand
my adoration for you just keeps on growing

dear reader, shes so beautiful
more comparable than a sunset beach.
but that orangy skyline eventually fades to black
unlike her face which darkness cannot reach.

from first thing in the morning
to last thing late at night
or half asleep through exhaustion
yet still a beauteous sight. (swear on D`s life)

the soft roundness of her cheeks,
the womanly expressions of her eyes,
the way she smiles and tilts her head,
the freaking s*xuality of her thighs!!!

strangleholds my bursting heart
brings me to my begging knees,
and when she constantly types `i love you`
i just cant believe what i read.

that this gorgeous angel without wings
looks upon me with loving desires,
sets my soul aflame when she says my name
sends my love higher and higher.

Oh my sweet miss American pie
don't ever change your ways,
i would willingly walk through fire..;)
to be with you unto my grave.

and even in the ever after
we`ve made a promise to meet again
two poets in true love is as rare as stardust
such extremity of emotion and devotion will ever reign

God bless you Michelle for who you ARE, your wonderful. Romeo had Juliet, Anthony had Cleopatra, John had Yoko and now Craig has Michelle...xxx

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  • 18 years ago

    by tomuchhurt

    Cute! she is so lucky to have someone like, you, hold onto that and it will never fade away, great write.
    XOXOXO
    Kamille
    P.S. come check out some of my poems i think you'll like DO YOU STILL.........

  • 20 years ago

    by Gracie Jo

    I loved this poem. Awesome job!

    ~Grace

  • 20 years ago

    by julie

    excellent darlin, absoloutly excellent. What a lucky gal! -xx-