Aww. Knowing you this is devistating. I mean its written so well, but god dang its got a point. Nice piece.

I absolutely love this piece. It reminds me so much of myself its... scary. Although it's hauntingly written there's one little grammatical mistake.

In the line "because she's been do it so long"
I think you mean to say "because she's been doing it so long"

Other than that one tiny little error its flawless. I love it, took my breath away and left tears in my eyes.
<3 Never Give Up dear.

I can feel that way too. I used to be like that when I was younger. And know it comes to my realization that it was only in our minds, that we are feeling empty and feels like nobody cares. We are the first who is responsible for our feelings, no one would truly understand us as we understand ourselves. However it also depends on how we want our life to be. Trust in God above and He will give you strength to faced those trials in life. I knew a lot of us keep blaming others and ourselves also when something happen bad to us. A lot of people asking "If there is God? Then why a lot of people suffering?" Well, it depends on what we've done before, if you're successful it is because of you're sacrifices you've done. And if you're not, ask yourself what makes you not achieved it? I've realized that we are having differences to realize how lucky are we to other people because not all people can have the chance of having what we have now. Hey, I know I'm taking it too long. But I hope it helps.