Dive

by Maple Tree   Jul 7, 2012


I have moments within a world of destruction

where those miniscule words are the fire

that is all I need to express the sounds

of a restless flower that fades within the mist

upon a sweet summer night-

I have fallen...

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  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    Oh the images in this! It saddened me that on such a beautiful night that you had fallen. Oh that broke my heart :(

    Awesome write though.

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by mandy

    "Where those miniscule words are the fire"

    -Loved this line. I think it reflects how important the small things in life are.

    Beautiful, very moving. 5/5

    mandy :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    Awesome write as usual, great job:)

  • 12 years ago

    by Thomas

    Sometimes the little things can hurt the most.

    Powerful poetry you got here ;)

  • 12 years ago

    by Khalid M Darwish

    The best poem is "Few words with multiple hits"! Powerful piece my friend! I enjoyed the reading.

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