Comments : Mesmerized by What Begins to Whisper

  • 12 years ago

    by Britt

    Another VERY different poem from you. Maybe I just haven't been reading your poetry lately, I don't know, but your newer stuff seems so much darker than the norm!

    This reminded me of a prostitute in a way, lol, and I apologize if I have this totally wrong. I think the beginning stanza with the nightly talent in a busy city made me think of that.

    Either that or it's of a singer, jazz maybe. I don't know what made me think that way either. It's funny, I feel there is a lot missing (not in a bad way lol) that I could plug into the poem to make it my own story in my head. That's really interesting! :)