by mo3taz Jul 8, 2012
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Diamond display, of a dawn of a day |
by mo3taz
Thanks White Orchid. |
by White Orchid
I liked this, it had deep emotion in it and I really liked the line "you have not thought what the lonely gift has brought". Sometimes people don't understand how their actions affect ones. I thought this had great flow and really good rhymes. Nice write. And sorry I actually read this poem earlier and was meaning to return to comment on it. But this was written well and I think the spelling you want is "bore" instead of boor. Just something to help ya. |