Wow, what as powerful peice of writing. You have captured that emotion so well in which you feel trapped between missing them and wating to be with them, and making them proud. I think anyone who has lost someone close to them can relate to that feeling of worry about what they would be thinking now.

I think they would be proud of your writing, and you should be too.

I love you hunny <3

They are proud of you

Your an amazing writer

:)

I'm sorry for your losts hun... keep your head up and stay strong.. and Amen to you now having two wonderful guardian angels watching over you now. You're always in my prayers..

Much love babz!

Wow , this is amazing such a deep poem the emotions just leap off the page

You do make them proud
Believe me

May they rest in peace

Just realised I've commented twice lol
I said to myself this sounds so familiar lol