My Safe Space

by Baby Rainbow   Jul 9, 2012


There is a place I often go,
And of this place no one will know.
With a pale blue sky,
In which the birds soar high.
The grass so soft and green,
Like nothing you have seen.
Flowers growing from the ground,
Peace and calm is all around.
And in this place I often go,
My confidence and powers grow.
Because this place I can control,
Taking back what others stole.
And in this place that I call mine,
I made a sun that will always shine.
It is my safe space, where I am me,
MY safe space where I am free.

Saffie.
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  • 12 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Only suggestion is to fix misspelling of "made" near the last few lines...otherwise, I loved the flow in this, it felt like it was short and concise, yet you perfectly penned and left open to the reader the idea of our own space. You didn't specifically name where it was, but you said it's where flowers grow and serenity lays. I also liked the part about you controlling it too, you have your heart that leads you there and you and only you can fully use it, fully make it yours. I thought it was neat how you worded the title too....some people call it their dreamland, getaway place, quiet place, but you called it 'safe space' and that really says a lot more.

    Great write :)

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