Comments : My Safe Space

  • 12 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Only suggestion is to fix misspelling of "made" near the last few lines...otherwise, I loved the flow in this, it felt like it was short and concise, yet you perfectly penned and left open to the reader the idea of our own space. You didn't specifically name where it was, but you said it's where flowers grow and serenity lays. I also liked the part about you controlling it too, you have your heart that leads you there and you and only you can fully use it, fully make it yours. I thought it was neat how you worded the title too....some people call it their dreamland, getaway place, quiet place, but you called it 'safe space' and that really says a lot more.

    Great write :)