Autumn ( haiku )

by Baby Rainbow   Jul 9, 2012


Autumn once again
Oh watch the leaves as they fall
Making lots of mess!

Saffie
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  • 11 years ago

    by Everlasting

    Whenever Autumns comes by , I usually don't pay attention to when the leaves fall. I just noticed the tree's naked and that's when I know Autumn came by. Now that I think about it.. may be Autumn is really handsome, it makes the majority of the leaves fall for him. Nice Haiku. I enjoyed this one.

  • 12 years ago

    by Unrequited

    I love autumn, and have written a few pieces on it as well. Love the voice in this, very positive. I think I get caught up in being too serious in my work, and wish I could take a little time to sound more upbeat, like you have here. :)