"memories
confuse her into thinking
dreams bloom in what
she can consume."

I love this part. It played on my tongue nicely but I also like the (unintentional?) internal rhyme. It gave an easy feel to this read with great flow. I like the message here, too. Memories always confuse us and sometimes we can accomplish things and sometimes we just can't.. but that's okay.

Very well written!

"memories
confuse her into thinking
dreams bloom in what
she can consume."

I love this part. It played on my tongue nicely but I also like the (unintentional?) internal rhyme. It gave an easy feel to this read with great flow. I like the message here, too. Memories always confuse us and sometimes we can accomplish things and sometimes we just can't.. but that's okay.

Very well written!