Believe In You ( rondeau )

by Baby Rainbow   Jul 10, 2012


Believe in you as others do
and to yourself always be true.
Do not give in to all the fright,
everything will be alright
as on this journey you have grew.

You have such strength inside of you
and now you hold the power too.
You are a star shining so bright.

Believe in you!

Of all your dreams you ever knew
still keep them all close to your view.
As you may feel no hope tonight
but in your future there is light.

Believe in you!

Saffie
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  • 11 years ago

    by Everlasting

    Believe in You!

    I like it, there were some parts that sounded awkward like "you have grew," but after I finished reading I realized it was due to following a rhyme scheme and delivering the message. Good message by the way. I think if you want you could forget about the form and focus on the message. like re-write the poem so the lines won't sound a bit awkward, but I enjoyed reading this piece.

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