My brothers eyes

by The Poet Behind The Poems   Jul 10, 2012


Wrapped In the stars on top
of white fluffy carpets
He guides us, through the wind
with his secret messages

Every raindrop that falls, a tear
I shed wondering if I could
see his smile one last time
And look down on him guiding him

Like he guides me.

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  • 12 years ago

    by average thoughts

    It always hurt wen d one who guide us passed away..

  • 12 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    This is sad but very beautiful written

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    This piece is quite sad but beautiful. I mean the image of someone looking down on us and guiding us is beautiful and makes me think of the people in my past who have died and I wonder if they are looking down on us.

    The second stanza I did wonder a little though, in the end were you saying that you were the one that wanted to look down on him and guide him?

    Is this about your actual brother? If so I am sorry that he has passed away :(

    xx

  • 12 years ago

    by ronel mccarthy

    Lovely write........sad but meaningful

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